Six Sunday #35 Forsaking the Prize Part 5

Busy. Busy weekend. Right now, I’m probably glued to the TV watching the V8 Supercars, Australia’s premier racing series and my favorite and only sport to watch. Go Ford & DJR! Hope your day is just as fun. Continuing on from last week.

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“This is not what I expected,” Leopold growled. “The duke said you were well cared for.”

“The duke lied, or else has a different definition of care than most people.”

“How can you not be furious?”

“The Duke of Romsey is dead. Cousin Edwin is dead, and the young duke doesn’t look a bit like either of them.”

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Oh and PS: I do try to reciprocate and visit anyone who comments on my posts but sometimes that proves impossible. If you use word verification on your  blog it’s likely I couldn’t pass the test. After three attempts to comment, I admit defeat and move on to the next blogger. 🙁

I really appreciate everyone who reads and comments each week, and those visiting my blog for the first time. You will find amazing authors participating in Six Sunday by visiting the host site, Six Sentence Sunday and by searching for #sixsunday via Twitter.

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jeannemiro
8 years ago

Hi Heather!

I’m really enjoying get part of the excerpts a little at a time! I can’t wait to read Forsaking the Prize.

S E Gilchrist
8 years ago

I like how this ends, very intriguing & makes me want to read on. Love hot regency romances.

Kylie Scott
8 years ago

Great dialogue. Very nicely done and highly intriguing.

Cassandra Dean
8 years ago

Ohhh, intriguing! Wonderful dialogue and a great six, Heather 😀

gayleramage
8 years ago

Oooh, very intrigued!

Ana
Ana
8 years ago

I agree about the word verification. Some people don’t know it’s on their site though (blogger switched it on automatically in January). I’ve had to give up several times myself.

Will be interested to see what happens to the new duke.

Joanne Stewart
8 years ago

Very intriguing excerpt!

I used to use the word verification. It keeps out the trash, but I agree. It gets to be too much, going blind trying to type something and still being able to get through. I did away with it on mine when people mentioned they were having trouble getting in. Not worth it!

Sandra Sookoo
8 years ago

Liked the snippet. Sometimes, you have to move, huh? Nice job!

Layna
8 years ago

Intriguing snippet.

“The duke lied, or else has a different definition of care than most people.” -So much detail in one sentence. Love it!

Taryn Kincaid
8 years ago

Wonderful dialogue. Shows so much.

Lorraine Paton
8 years ago

Love the way you’ve revealed both information and their character in your dialogue. 🙂

Sue
Sue
8 years ago

I am almost blind so the word verification is a challenge. Glad to hear I’m not the only one. Guess his attitude is what’s done is done, and now I hope he will heal.

Elin Gregory
8 years ago

Terrific! I like the pragmatism of Tobias and the sympathy of Leopold.

I have problems with word verification, too. I can read one or the other but rarely both. 🙂

veronicascott
8 years ago

This story just keeps getting more and more intriguing with each excerpt – terrific six!

Stevie Carroll
8 years ago

Very intriguing last line there.

Donna Cummings
8 years ago

I like the pragmatic attitude Tobias displays in these snippets — although I think there’s more under the surface there. It definitely keeps me intrigued. 🙂

Laura Kaye
8 years ago

Intriguing…makes me want to know more!

Carrie Crain
Carrie Crain
8 years ago

I can’t seem to do that word verification either. It’s frustrating and quite annoying. I love his dialogue, sounds arrogant but in a good way!

Gemma Parkes
8 years ago

Lovely dialogue!

Angela Quarles
8 years ago

Intriguing! Makes me want to know more!

Ryan Derham
8 years ago

Great dialogue…really shows the depth of her character. Intriguing story!

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