Six Sentence Sunday #16: Forsaking the Prize

Another lovely Sunday has rolled around. Where has the week gone? I’m continuing with snippets from my current WIP, Forsaking the Prize. This is another example of how utterly problematic Tobias Randall is for Blythe’s peace of mind.

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The door swung fully open. “You can’t leave until your name is cleared. Neither can I, for that matter,” Tobias Randall added cheerfully.

Blythe glanced at him and looked away quickly, fighting to keep a blush from her cheeks. Tobias Randall had come to add his tuppence worth to the discussion but was only dressed in a sheet. How typical of his type of man.

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Ryan
9 years ago

Typical yes, but not stupid! Lol Fun six, Heather!

Teresa Cypher-Willowlive
9 years ago

I like it! The last line made me chuckle… Well done!

Ceri Hebert
9 years ago

Dressed in a sheet? Intriguing! Great job. 🙂

Donna Cummings
9 years ago

LOL — this is great fun. I love Tobias and his cheerfulness. And his clothing choice. 🙂

Paula Martin
9 years ago

How intriguing – dressed only in a sheet?

Sue
Sue
9 years ago

Well, what kind of sheet? plain ? floral? king size? – yeah would have to be king sized 😀

veronicascott
9 years ago

Love the way this snippet ended, left me dying for MORE! Well done 🙂

angela quarles
9 years ago

I agree, loved this snippet– you’ve done a great job catching his character here!

Candice Bundy
9 years ago

Haha! Love his clothing choice, by his knowing smile certainly chosen just to see the lovely blush upon her cheeks. Fab six!

sarahballance
9 years ago

Oooh, I like him already! What a great six!

Sabrina Garie
9 years ago

Great six. You can really feel her discomfort. He’s definitely someone I’d like to get to know.

gayleramage
9 years ago

Ooh, intriguing! Back for more next week! 😀

gzidar
9 years ago

Nice six, makes me want to know more about their relationship and what is going on.

Lorraine Paton
9 years ago

Intriguing six! Sounds like she has gotten herself into quite a predicament. 🙂

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