Six Sentence Sunday #13: Forsaking the Prize

Wow. 2012 is flying by. So hard to believe we’re already in March. Another post for six sentence sunday (along with the other 100+ authors participating in this weekly event). This week I’m offering up something really fresh, as in something written very recently. I’m in the early stages of writing Forsaking the Prize and thought I’d share this small sample of my wip. This is Tobias’ first night at Romsey Abbey and he’s just decided to take a grand tour with Eamon Murphy as his guide.

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“I’m not as well versed as I’d like to be about the abbey,” Murphy mumbled.

Tobias set his hand to his ear. “Speak up man, cannon fire has ruined my hearing. Did you just say your nurse lives at the abbey?”

Murphy gave him a flat, hostile stare. “I really didn’t miss you.”

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Corinne Davies
9 years ago

I love your humour and can’t wait to read more 🙂

diannehartsock
9 years ago

Okay, you just made me laugh. I love that in a story! Now I’m hooked… 🙂

Krystal Wade (@KrystalWade)
9 years ago

He sounds like the embarrassing kind of friend! 😉

Paula Martin
9 years ago

Nice humor – made me smile.

veronicascott
9 years ago

Funny, unexpected twist and turn in just six sentences! Excellent excerpt!

sarahballance
9 years ago

LOL! I love the detail with the cannon fire!

Debra Moore
9 years ago

That’s funny! Loved it!

Rebecca Royce
9 years ago

I just laughed aloud. Well done.

Liz Crowe
9 years ago

funny!!! like it a lot.

Layna
9 years ago

LOL Too funny!
Intriguing snippet, and I can’t wait to read more. 🙂

gzidar
9 years ago

I can see the expression on his face. Nice one, I get the impression that the pair know each other well.

Sue
Sue
9 years ago

Well as you said – it’s new – so I don’t know the two gentlement featured. However i can tell they’re not best friends lol and love the humour – they obviously know each other for a long time?

charmaine gordon
9 years ago

Hi Heather, You’ve won an ebook copy of RECONSTRUCTING CHARLIE FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY blog last week. Please send your email addy and I’ll send the code for your gift. Enjoy the journey, my friend,
Charmaine Gordon

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