For those of you who don’t remember, I’m part of the Lady Scribes group blog offering free critiques of a first kiss scene. Today is submission day at Lady Scribes so if you have a first kiss scene that you’d like feedback on please post as a comment (around 500 words) to http://ladyscribes.blogspot.com/2010/02/crit-friday-open-first-kiss.html .
There are more details on the blog and we would love to critique your work.